2012년 7월 29일 일요일
Ode to my Phone
Dear my fabulous phone
Do you remember the first time we met? It was May, 2011. Before I bet you, my best friend was the lolly pop. He was a blue guy with a fancy lights and actually, he was my first best friend ever. I thought I was going to be with him for at least two years since I had to pay the money if I didn't. But when I totally messed up the middle term, my mom crashed him in front of me. I was so shocked to see him die. I thought I will never have my best friend again. But when her anger eased up a little, she finally brought you to me.
You became my best friend since than. Although the only thing that you could do for me were calls and sending tect messages, I cared a lot about you until the galexy tab came to my house last December. I have to admit, dear friend that I was bewitched my him. He could do kakao talk and photo shop and all sorts of things that I couldn't do with you. The best thing that I like from him is that he lets me do web surfing. So after he came, I didn't even look at you and I played with him all day long. But you know what? Now, I regret what I did becuase in here, GLPS, I had to give him to the PA and I can only use it for the second self study.
Now my friend, I realized that you were my true friend who stay by my side most of the time. I apologize for being such an idiot. Without you, I can't call my parents or connect my friends. So, will you accept my apology and be my friend again?
P.S. I might be playing with galexy tab again after this camp. Please forgive me with your wide heart even if I do.
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It is a very good choice of subject and also a well written ode including a lot of emotion. I liked how you really talked to your phone. It makes this ode more personal. Maybe you can improve a lttle more by adding some length. Overall, I liked it very much.
답글삭제I think it nice that you were honest. Being honest is probably the most important thing ever. Since you talked at length about the galaxy tab, maybe it might be a good idea to talk about your own phone a bit longer. Good job!
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